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so angry I could spit
I hold you
in utter contempt
where you stay forever oblivious
to the void that is you

so indolent in affairs of spirit
desperately reaching in liaisons humane
surpassing belief
beyond reproach

but how can a soul so laden
explain possession of your barren heart



[I think I'll stick to science]
deadsilence
QUOTE(so angry I could spit @ Jan 13 2005, 10:02 AM)
I hold you
in utter contempt
where you stay forever oblivious
to the void that is you

so indolent in affairs of spirit
desperately reaching in liaisons humane
surpassing belief
beyond reproach

but how can a soul so laden
explain possession of your barren heart

[I think I'll stick to science]
*


If you hate me as you say
why must you tell them all
you could simply run away
and leave me here to fall
for without you I would drop
like a leave from an old tree
and winter would soon come
and with snow bury me
But instead you chop the tree
to ensure there is no growth
for all the other leaves
a big loss for us both.


think I'll stick to my job too. rolleyes.gif
so angry I could spit
QUOTE(deadsilence @ Jan 13 2005, 12:36 PM)
If you hate me as you say
why must you tell them all
you could simply run away
and leave me here to fall
for without you I would drop
like a leave from an old tree
and winter would soon come
and with snow bury me
But instead you chop the tree
to ensure there is no growth
for all the other leaves
a big loss for us both.
think I'll stick to my job too. rolleyes.gif
*


Dunno, I think you make a point. So either we're both brilliant or we're total dorks on a similar wavelength.
deadsilence
QUOTE(so angry I could spit @ Jan 13 2005, 01:12 PM)
Dunno, I think you make a point.  So either we're both brilliant or we're total dorks on a similar wavelength.
*

LOL dork,,,,Not me Im a phsycho tough guy who bullied everyone through life.....Bit worse then a dork dontcha think? lol.gif lol.gif
Hey even tough guys grow up, but Im still waiting.
shawneedaughter
I like what both of you have written, it is from your heart. smile.gif

keep writing smile.gif
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